Keishi: Squall is definitely into Irvine, he's just not so sure how to handle things.
Starlit Hope, Redrum: Thank you!
Aethen: Definitely sweet. Subtle, sweet, and something I'm pretty darned proud of, actually.
Redundant Goddess: Well, heck. Got the biggest shock of my life when I saw this review slide into my inbox! I had despaired of anyone ever reviewing this again. Thank you very much!
LadyTwist: Thank you very much! It's so nice when someone lets me know how they felt about this one. :)
LiquidAlchemist: Whoo, another review! I'm rather fond of this little ficlet myself. :) I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
coldfiredragon: I can't remember if I responded to this directly... Anyway, no, I've never come up with anything to add to this, and I refuse to drag things on with no real purpose. No plan/outline means no story. Still, as with everything, should inspiration strike me down I would definitely expand on this.
AngelicOrgueil: I'm very happy you liked it. As a sort of experiment in first person writing, I think I did okay.